On A Portrait of Two Beautiful Young People
A Brother and Sister
By Gerard Manley Hopkins
O I admire and sorrow! The heart’s eye grieves
Discovering you, dark tramplers, tyrant years.
A juice rides rich through bluebells, in vine leaves,
And beauty’s dearest veriest vein is tears.
Happy the father, mother of these! Too fast:
Not that, but thus far, all with frailty, blest
In one fair fall; but, for time’s aftercast,
Creatures all heft, hope, hazard, interest.
And are they thus? The fine, the fingering beams
Their young delightful hour do feature down
That fleeted else like day-dissolvèd dreams
Or ringlet-race on burling Barrow brown.
She leans on him with such contentment fond
As well with sister sits, would well the wife;
His looks, the soul’s own letters, see beyond,
Gaze on, and fall directly forth on life.
But ah, bright forelock, cluster that you are
Of favoured make and mind and health and youth,
Where lies your landmark, seamark, or soul’s star?
There’s none but truth can stead you. Christ is truth.
There’s none but good can be good, both for you
And what sways with you, maybe this sweet maid;
None good, but God — a warning wavèd to
One once that was found wanting when Good weighed.
Man lives that list, that leaning in the will
No wisdom can forecast by gauge or guess,
The selfless self of self, most strange, most still,
Fast furled and all foredrawn to No or Yes.
Your feast of; that most in you earnest eye
May but call on your banes to more carouse.
Worst will the best. What worm was here, we cry,
To have havoc-pocked so, see, the hung-heavenward boughs?
Enough: corruption was the world’s first woe.
What need I strain my heart beyond my ken?
O but I bear my burning witness though
Against the wild and wanton work of men.
In the modern scholarly edition of the poems of Gerard Manley Hopkins, which appeared in 1990, the editor notes that in the preceding edition of 1948 a number of poems — eighty-two, in fact — were offered, after the preceding groups called “Early Poems” and “Poems,” as “Unfinished Poems, Fragments, Light Verse.” Those poems were sidelined, and so they were rarely anthologized, taught, or even read. Many of these apparently “lesser” pieces seemed to my young self — and still seem now — just as good as the poems honored in the front of the book. Although the new edition repaired this unfortunate editorial segregation by printing all the poems in chronological order, I still regret the relative obscurity of the “unfinished” poems. A late and ambitious one of them, called “On the Portrait of Two Beautiful Young People,” is worth pondering, not least to draw readers’ attention to its existence. It embodies the agony of Hopkins’ last years, in which he repeatedly staged a debate between his own theory of unbidden creativity and the religious theory of free will.
At the age of twenty-two, Gerard Hopkins, an ardent young English poet and a recent graduate of Oxford (where he had shone as a brilliant student of the classics), prays that he may willingly advance beyond the legitimate pleasures of the senses in favor of the better joys of ascetic devotion. For the delight of the ear in song and speech, he will substitute contemplative silence and muteness in self-expression; instead of the distractions of worldly life, his eye will find “the uncreated light.” In gentle and unstrained “perfect” quatrains, each rhythmically serene line rhyming exactly with another, he enjoins the five natural senses to fix on spiritual pleasures. He begins the poem, which he calls “The Habit of Perfection,” with the ear and the eye:
Elected Silence, sing to meAnd beat upon my whorlèd ear,
Pipe me to pastures still and be
The music that I care to hear.
Shape nothing, lips; be lovely-dumb:
It is the shut, the curfew sent
From there where all surrenders come
Which only makes you eloquent.
Be shellèd eyes, with double dark
And find the uncreated light:
This ruck and reel which you remark
Coils, keeps, and teases simple sight.
He burned his own copies of his youthful poems (leaving some copies, however, with family and friends and letting others remain in drafts embedded in his diaries). Then, converted from his family’s Anglican Protestantism to Roman Catholicism, Gerard Hopkins became a Jesuit priest.
He had supposed, before his ordination, that his ascetic desire to disregard sense-pleasure would ensure access to higher spiritual delights, and that he would willingly suspend his writing of poems in favor of consecrating all his time to his priestly duties. He did just that for seven years. Then, with the implied permission (or so he felt) of his Jesuit superior, who had said that someone should commemorate the five German Roman Catholic nuns, legally expelled from Germany for their religion, who had drowned when their ship, the Deutschland, was wrecked off the coast of Kent, Hopkins resumed writing poetry with a fiercely original long poem called”The Wreck of the Deutschland.” Hopkins’ return to the practice of verse continued until his premature death, of typhoid fever, when he was only forty-four.
After his untroubled and open-hearted early election of silence, now writing as a priest, Hopkins became troubled by an increasingly anxious scrupulosity, suspecting that art must be blighted in its essence, infected by that original sin inherited by all human beings. If he, vowed to God’s service, chooses to write poetry, does he sin by that worldly choice? In an extraordinarily agile swerve, Hopkins rebukes, in the draft of a poem, the idea that composing a work of art — whether architectural or musical — is rightly characterized as an act of free will subject to moral judgment, arguing that the artist is driven to create by a compelling force subject to no external law, divine or secular. (The untitled draft, which we used to know by its first line “How all’s to one thing wrought!”, has had its stanzas rearranged, and the first line now reads “Who shaped these walls has shewn.” The rearrangement seems to me unconvincing.) It is impossible, he believes, to deduce the moral state of the artist or the composer from the work of art, since art is not created on a plane to which the moral law applies. The concept of obedience to a pre-existing moral or spiritual law and the concept of the freedom of the will are simply not relevant to the surprising and unpremeditated surge of inspiration which arises spontaneously, unbidden by the will.
Drawing on his own experience, Hopkins claims that the artist is moved by a strange controlling power:
Not free in this because
His powers seemed free to play:
He swept that scope he wa
To sweep and must obey.
Nor angel insight can
Learn how the heart is hence:
Since all the make of man
Is law’s indifference
Therefore this masterhood,
This piece of perfect song,
This fault-not-found-with good
Is neither right nor wrong.
Stung by the frequent condemnation of artworks (and, by implication, of artists) on moral grounds, Hopkins dismisses such judgments by giving to his unphilosophical reader — in absolutely plain, even childish, language — examples of three arts that cannot possibly be evaluated by moral standards: painting, melody, and the “architectural” constructions (such as a honeycomb) of animal instinct. These are “neither right nor wrong,”
No more than red and blue,
No more than Re and Mi,
Or sweet the golden glue
That’s built for by the bee.
Clever as this is, it has not come to grips with the semantic content of the poet’s own poems: must they, because their medium is language, exist on the human plane of right and wrong, conforming themselves to a binary ethic of Yes or No? Or can his poems be left to exist solely on the aesthetic plane from which they originated, where the criterion of success is the approach to formal perfection? In judging art, must we abandon the aesthetic of the working artist, where inspiration drives what Keats called “the innumerable compositions and decompositions” intrinsic to the task of writing poetry? May the artist not conceive of his works as belonging among the pure “wild and wide” goods of Nature, all divinely created, all of innumerable shadings?
For good grows wild and wide,
Has shades, is nowhere none;
Or must he instead value his poetry according to its (cruelly restricted) choice of a single presiding ethical “chieftain,” God or Satan?
But right must seek a side
And choose for chieftain one.
Is the purpose of art to achieve a compelled artifact aspiring to perfection of form? Or is it rather to present a substantial moral argument? At this moment in his intellectual evolution, Hopkins offers an enigmatic two-part answer:
What makes the man and what
The man within that makes:
Ask whom he serves or not
Serves and what side he takes.
The poet’s riddle asks first “What makes the man” (to which the answer is presumably a natural process, since the poet is not asking “Who makes the man”). Even more strangely, the riddle in its next two lines asks about the verse-product, about “what/ The man within that makes”. What is the context, the “that” which the man is “within”? By its neutral reference, “that” must once again stand for a natural process. In his four-line epigram Hopkins sums up the apparently impersonal natural force impelling the human creator, no less a creature of biological instinct than the bee. Only after asserting the idiosyncratic force that both makes and is made by the artist can the poet raise the question of the artist’s ultimate moral allegiance. When Hopkins stations against each other the natural, passionate, and independent urgency of creation and the strict moral urgency of intellectually ethical decision, the riddling relation between the two urgencies is an uneasy one.
Seven years pass. It is 1886 and Hopkins is forty-two. Everything has changed in his circumstances: in 1884 he had been dispatched from England to Ireland to serve as Professor of Classics in the Catholic University in Dublin, newly re-founded by the Jesuits. Remembering, painfully, Jesus’ announcement, “I came not to send peace, but a sword” (Matthew 10:34), the poet finds himself isolated “at three removes,” not only from his native England but also from his Protestant family and his former company of English Jesuits. In a post-famine era when Ireland was implacably hostile to England, he was the only English Jesuit in all of Ireland. He realizes, desolately, that his university appointment in Dublin is likely to be permanent:
To seem the stranger lies my lot, my life
Among strangers. Father and mother dear,
Brothers and sisters are in Christ not near,
And he my peace/ my parting, sword and strife.
****
I am in Ireland now; now I am at a third
Remove.
His depression is so intense that he refers to himself in the past tense, as though he had died: he is not a “beginner” but “a lonely began.”
The religious, intellectual, scholarly, psychological, and physical trials that Hopkins had undergone in Ireland brought him, in 1886, the year of his poem on the portrait of two beautiful children, to a crisis of distress in which his commitment to accuracy obliged him to graph, in a meticulous and experimental style, his mind’s unbearable nervous oscillations among countless possible thoughts. His aesthetic drive is increasingly conditioned by a merciless self-scrutiny, the “helpless self-loathing” that he reveals in his later Dublin retreat notes. His familiar but ever-changing stand-off between the aesthetic and the moral now reappears in a tense poem that he names as if it were a commentary: “On the Portrait of Two Beautiful Young People.” When he sees, presumably in a wealthy family’s house, a watercolor portrait of two children, he is on his Christmas holiday. He has found it almost impossible to write poetry while teaching, but with his incessant anxiety somewhat reduced by distance from the university, he has the freedom to admire the art of the portraitist as well as the appealing beauty of the children. His title renders them merely as ungendered young “people,” but his subtitle (“a Brother and Sister”) represents them as pre-adolescent siblings, their innocence still undamaged.Although the poet’s initial response is an admiring one, ratifying the double beauty of both the children and the tender portrait, his anxiety soon awakens reflection on the children, their parents, and their probable future, and his mind leaps to an immediate moral sorrow inseparable from his initial aesthetic admiration. “O I admire” he says while attaching — without taking a breath — his second verb and its exclamation point, “and sorrow!” In that first line, he establishes the rapid — the instantaneous — fluctuations of response that the poem will mirror. His mixed emotions sometimes arrive in balanced opposition, but more often they emerge as restless questioning, philosophical perplexity, or psychological dread. Compared to the tranquility of “elected silence” in “The Habit of Perfection,” the turbulent stirrings besetting him before the portrait allow him only temporary moments of repose, each one rapidly disturbed into further disquiet. The tide of admiration that had in the past prompted “How all’s to one thing wrought!” ebbs, undermined by the looming sorrow prompted by the portrait.
Hopkins’ increasing depression will bring him, by the end of the poem, to a desperate conclusion — that destiny may destroy these children. In that respect, the “beautiful” but static watercolor is mendacious. The artist has framed the children within a wreath of unspoiled flowers, fruit on tree-branches, and flourishing grapevines (generating the “bluebells” and “juice” of the first stanza), but does this unblemished context truthfully reflect the variable and endangered course of human fate that must be undergone by the children? Remembering the tree of the knowledge of good and evil from which Eve, tempted by the serpent, plucked the forbidden fruit, the poet arrives, in his penultimate stanza, at a dire image of the children’s likely future, crying out, as he approaches his conclusion, against the fall of man that brought disease and death into the world:
What worm was here, we cry,
To have havoc-pocked so, see, the hung-heavenward
boughs?
As Hopkins mentioned in a letter, he adopted as his verse-form the sedate, if sorrowful, perfectly rhymed quatrains of Gray’s famous “Elegy Written in a Country Churchyard,” because he thought that he could “make something.” He, too, is writing an elegy grieving the children’s potential end, likely to be a blighted one. Six years earlier, responding to the tears of the child “Margaret” mourning the fall of leaves, he had expressed a horrible certainty with the words “born for”: “It is the blight man was born for, / It is Margaret you mourn for.” At least Gray could predict the certain future of his dead villagers: they will be recalled, if at all, in “the short and simple annals of the poor.” Their humble life, while it may exclude the prospect of political or literary fame, also keeps them from the hideous criminal acts of the powerful: they will not “wade through slaughter to a throne, / And shut the gates of mercy on mankind.” Hopkins, by contrast, can say nothing so reassuring about the children: his fear disrupts his lines, hurling them far from Gray’s even pace and calm punctuation. Both the poet’s quandary before the mendacious (and therefore sentimental) portrait — representing life falsely as a paradisal scene — and his vexing ignorance of the children’s moral future obliterate tranquility as soon as the poem opens.
Hopkins’ emotional announcement — “O I admire and sorrow!” — had burst forth, forcibly breaking its single line in two by the word “sorrow” and the full stop at the exclamation point. The second stanza — Hopkins’ unsettling transcription of his almost simultaneous mental self-contradictions — presents, as its mimicry of agitated thought, an unstable and incoherent syntax and an over-supply of punctuation (nine commas, an exclamation point, a colon, a semi-colon, a period). We could paraphrase the stanza and iron out our first impressions of incoherence by following Hopkins’ line of reasoning: we could say that Hopkins first exclaims how happy the parents are in having such beautiful children, then feels that he spoke too quickly. No, he stammers, the parents cannot be said to be permanently happy (that particular luck cannot be ensured); but at least the parents are happy thus far, but we must recall (he reluctantly admits) the frailty of fortune; and after the present fleeting phase of childhood there will be an “aftercast” of time’s baleful dice — with what result? Following that gamble, the children’s fate and its effect on their parents can only be speculated upon. These young creatures are to their parents, thinks the poet in summary, a “heft” (a burden, from “heave”), a hope, a hazard (all alliterating with, and thereby reinforcing, the initial “Happy”). Yet in the final noun, they become merely an “interest.” This, the sole “neutral” noun of the series, detaches the spectator Hopkins from his initial emotional participation in the “happy” parents’ good fortune.
If we consider, now, our first glimpse of this second stanza, we see Hopkins — hardly yet into his subject — becoming almost unintelligible as he daringly mimics on the page the confusing and reckless speed of his turbulent thought:
Happy the father, mother of these! Too fast:
Not that, but thus far, all with frailty, blest
In one fair fall; but, for time’s aftercast,
Creatures all heft, hope, hazard, interest.
Hopkins will continue to represent the very melody of his mind’s oscillations in distress: these sometimes appear in balanced oppositions but more often become percussive in restless questioning, philosophical perplexity, or further dread. His music culminates in a broken syntax and ill-coupled words as he addresses one of the endangered and innocent siblings, the brother, approaching (the poet fears) that almost certain ruined end:
Your feast of; that most in you earnest eye
May but call on your banes to more carouse.
Worst will the best. What worm was here, we cry,
To have havoc-pocked so, see, the hung-heavenward
boughs?
As the poem reaches its deepest image, which had been lurking in the poem from the opening, the words careen from zenith to pit, from pit to zenith. First Hopkins announces the benign “feast,” reflecting the boy’s earnest and innocent eye, but the feast immediately generates (in forward linear time) the gluttonous “carouse” of agents of ruin. By contrast, the next two examples are grimly retrospective: the outcome (“worst”) is prophesied of its beautiful past counter-superlative “best,” and behind the disastrous “havoc-pocked” branches we glimpse the originally healthy “hung-heavenward” boughs. The passionate indignation behind such retrospective truth declares itself in this disequilibrium of time, as it goes forward and backward in depicting hope succeeded by despair. (Hopkins must have noticed, as a schoolboy, the originality of Shakespeare’s pre-positioned disasters in lines where time has already dealt a death-blow before we are allowed to see the charm of youth, and time is already digging the grave of a fair countenance: “Time doth transfix the flourish set on youth, / And delves the parallels in beauty’s brow.”)
Against the buffets of threatening speculation, Hopkins allows occasional points of repose. The first is his initial admiring gaze on the tableau of the quiet and lovely portrait, where the artist has wreathed the beautiful siblings in a cluster of unspoiled flowers and grapevine, generating the bluebells, vine-leaves, and “juice” of the first stanza. But that initial pleasure is destroyed as soon as “sorrow” transfixes “admire,” “tyrant years” obliterate “youth,” and “tears” mar “beauty.” In the second instance in which anxiety is momentarily stilled, the poet creates in fantasy a serene future portrait where a conjectured young wife would replace the sister now by the boy’s side, while the boy himself, with the passage of time a husband, is poised (unlike his conditionally inserted bride) in a present-tense future, looking with steadfast confidence to his coming life:
She leans on him with such contentment fond
As well the sister sits, would well the wife;
His looks, the soul’s own letters, see beyond,
Gaze on, and fall directly forth on life.
Yet even in the poised moment of that imagined marriage portrait, the poet’s intellectual skepticism speaks out, warning the promising boy that he must embark on a moral and spiritual search for a reliable principle of stability:
But ah, bright forelock, cluster that you are
Of favoured make and mind and health and youth,
Where lies your landmark, seamark, or soul’s star?
There’s none but truth can stead you. Christ is truth.
In this direct address, echo-words create deliberate shadow-appearances of earlier poems. The first two echo-words, “mark,” and “star,” recall Shakespeare’s saying of love,
It is an ever-fixèd mark
That looks on tempests and is never shaken;
It is the star to every wandering bark,
Shakespeare’s ever-fixèd mark is (to Hopkins’ mind) a landmark, a lighthouse, and his star is the North Star by which sailors can navigate. The third echo-word here is “stead,” creating a shadow-appearance of Keats’s praise of the North Star in the sonnet “Bright star, would I were steadfast as thou art!” That line supplies, with its adjective “steadfast,” Hopkins’ “archaic” (OED) verb, “to stead” (to support, to help) for his desired outcome — that something will “stead” the boy in consistent uprightness as he advances in time.
Having asked the question of where lies that which will “stead” the boy, Hopkins offers, in a startling turn, two different and independent answers: “There’s none but truth can stead you. Christ is truth.” Each of the two answers in the line occupies a free-standing sentence uttering a single thought; each exhibits an unequivocal closing period; and each exists on its own distinct plane. The planes do not intersect. The first sentence replicates the poet’s instant answer to his own question on the plane of moral philosophy: “There’s none but truth can stead you.” The second sentence, “Christ is truth,” astonishingly inserts itself into the very same line-unit as the first, even though it exists on an entirely different level, that of Christian scripture. The first sentence sets before the boy’s eyes a daily intellectual and moral value — truth — indispensable to Hopkins himself, as his letters fiercely show. Yet the second, a scriptural sentence, “Christ is truth,” echoes Jesus’ saying: “I am the way, the truth, and the life” (John 14: 6). Such a credal assertion is less universally applicable than the common recommendation of moral truth as a reliable bulwark of the virtuous life.
To be true to himself, Hopkins has had to separate his two truths — one natural, one theological — and give to each its independence. Yet to present himself as he is, the poet has had to twin the two independent answers within a single line, as permanent absolute values equally held by him, inseparable. The poem balances precariously over the abyss between the two absolute standards, philosophical and theological. As he stands immobilized between the two distinct truths, Hopkins’ anxious mind, worrying for the young boy, hopes to bridge the abyss with a moral parable from a scriptural source: Jesus’ parable of the rich young man. There, invoking a value — “the Good”—that is apparently more flexible than “truth” and of a wider application, Hopkins creates another temporary point of mental repose, but blights it by recounting the Biblical parable’s unhappy conclusion.
In the brief parable, a rich young man, addressing Jesus as “Good Master,” asks what he must do to be saved. After rebuking him for the flattering title (“There is none good but one, that is, God”), Jesus tells the young man to observe the commandments. When the young man, professing that he has obeyed the commandments from his youth, asks what he must further do to be saved, Jesus offers a direct two-part answer: “Go and sell that thou hast, and give to the poor. . . and come and follow me.” The evangelist recounts the failed outcome: the young man “went away sorrowful, for he had great possessions” (Matthew 19:16-22). In Hopkins’ poem, the young man “was found wanting when Good weighed.” Knowing that the young people in the portrait are rich, Hopkins hopes to “stead” them by recalling to their minds Jesus’ warning that there is none good but God; he also reminds them that the young man was found wanting when he could not imagine depriving himself of riches. (A discarded stanza tells us that the poet forecasts a similar potential sin in the children, saying to them of the young man, “Rise he would not; fell/ Rather; he wore that millstone you wear, wealth.”)
So far, the poet’s forensic move in recommending truth has been to direct the boy to three different sources of truth — philosophical, credal, and parabolic. Unsatisfied with all three, Hopkins takes refuge in another source entirely, one existing on a plane unknown to his initial three. In one of the moves that made readers of the first edition of Hopkins’ poems in 1918 find him excitingly “modern,” the poet’s mind leaps to a psychological plane, a trustworthy source to “stead” the boy’s future. This resource, very obliquely described, has already been hinted at in one stanza of “How all’s to one thing wrought!” Although the artist there, said Hopkins, “changed in choice,” he did so not freely but compelled by “his being’s bent”: that “bent” “was an instrument / Which overvaulted voice.” The voice must follow, in every moment of choice, the “being’s bent,” the innate inclination of the self-being of the artist. In this way, the poet of “On the Portrait” leaps, in the climax of his poem, to the plane of the unfathomable, surpassing the three earlier recommendations — moral, credal, and scriptural. All three, after all, are conventional and well known to Christian homiletics. But now — on the analogy of his lingering Anglican belief in predestination — that God has decided from all eternity who will be saved and who will be damned, Hopkins has conceived a psychological plane of predestined idiosyncratic selfhood.
Somewhere inside the person, inside the very self, there is a pre-planted banner of the inaccessible source within the self. The banner remains in an inscrutable furled form which hides its emblem of the “the selfless self of self” — an abstraction unnamable as self or soul because it precedes both, resembling the Aristotelian “form” that determines a distinctive species-nature within inert earthly matter. For Hopkins, it was a matter of introspective fact that not only did each individual species differ from every other species, but every individual human being differed entirely from every other individual being, each bound, when engaged aesthetically, to express itself as itself. In the sonnet “As kingfishers catch fire,” Hopkins writes the poem of that conviction:
Each mortal thing does one thing and the same:
Deals out that being indoors each one dwells;
Selves — goes its self; myself it speaks and spells,
Crying What I do is me: for that I came.
I say more: the just man justices.
As he says in a notebook, he finds his self-being both distinctive and incommunicable: “My selfbeing, . . . that taste of myself, of I and me above and in all things . . . is more distinctive than the taste of ale or alum, more distinctive than the smell of walnutleaf or camphor, and is incommunicable by any means to another man.” At its deepest, his self-being was inaccessible even to the poet himself; otherwise he would have been able to find words to communicate it to others. Instead, he knows it only as the region from which the bolt of inspiration arrives, not at his summoning but as a gift. (Before Freud speculated on the incessant activity of the unconscious mind, insights were felt to be bestowed, not self-generated.)
From the outset of “On the Portrait of Two Beautiful Young People,” the poet’s linguistic patterns have attempted to arrange themselves under the broad concepts of “authentic” and “inauthentic” (on the aesthetic plane) and “good” and “evil” (on the moral plane). The mounting mass of words of uncertainty in the poem, amid its repeated stops and starts of syntax and punctuation, undoes the overt emotional contrast of “Admiration” and “Sorrow” with which the poet had begun. In short, the aesthetic aim of “On the Portrait of Two Beautiful Young People” is to mimic, credibly, the poet’s unpredictable vicissitudes of response as he perceives, from the angle of experience, the precarious future of innocence — by no means an unknown theme in previous verse, but rarely found, as here, in a single extended panicked struggle. The mind here, as it thinks one thing, instantly thinks its opposite, or else it cannot find clear opposites, or it is sunk in prophetic conflict, or it is about to relinquish altogether any attempt at coherence. In earlier verse, experience, modeled on religious conviction, tended to judge firmly: think of Blake’s Auguries of Innocence, with their instant condemnations and approvals: “A robin redbreast in a cage / Puts all heaven in a rage”; “If the sun and moon should doubt, / They’d immediately go out.” Hopkins’s intellectual subtlety instantly raises not one judgment, but all possible ones, but his love of truth makes him abhor his own skepticism.
As Hopkins suffers through his meditation on the portrait, he has seen the future of the children threatened by agents that could blight their branches of bright leaves and fruit. The worm — at once the serpent of the Fall of Man and Shakespeare’s canker-worm in the rose — devours the optimism of the poet’s initial hope, and deprives him, by the time his lyric ends, of all notes but tragedy and fury:
Enough: corruption was the world’s first woe;
What need I strain my thought beyond my ken?
O but I bear my burning witness though
Against the wild and wanton work of men.
In the fair copy that Hopkins sent to his friend Robert Bridges, the poem “On the Portrait” ends there, but Hopkins showed that he hoped to add more by appending two lines of asterisks before he mails it off for Bridges’ scrutiny. Nowhere does he explain the function of “the selfless self of self,” and how it fits, or does not, with the triple recommendations of truth preceding it.
“How all’s to one thing wrought!” had been spoken from the point of view of an audience admiring a successful creation in architecture or music. But now, gazing at the portrait to which he himself is audience, Hopkins is prompted to turn his gaze toward the absent painter’s own view: how does the artist himself explain the arrival of inspiration? Hopkins asserts, drawing on Wordsworth, that our inner aesthetic sense — physiological fellow to our other five — is as helpless not to feel joy in responding to perfection of form as the conventional senses are not to see or hear what presents itself to eye or ear. The aesthetic sense, he discovers, is indistinguishable in nature from the other impressionable senses, of which Wordsworth said, in “Expostulation and Reply,”
The eye — it cannot choose but see,
We cannot bid the ear be still;
Our bodies feel, where’er they be,
Against, or with our will.
The aesthetic sense produces responses in us strictly comparable to those that we experience as our natural (and spontaneous) biological responses to seeing, hearing, and tasting. The senses are all natural goods, shaded and variegated, of infinite potential, divinely created, knowing no modification by the will:
For good grows wild and wide,
Has shades, is nowhere none.
When Hopkins eventually permitted moral questioning to arise in “How all’s to one thing wrought!” he could not avoid the unequivocal question of salvation, of the “right” and the “wrong,” so different from the aesthetic judgment of “perfect” or “imperfect.”
But right must choose a side
And choose for chieftain one.
What makes the man and what
The man within that makes:
Ask whom he serves or not
Serves and what side he takes.
As Jesus warned of ethical choice, “No man can serve two masters” (Matthew 6:24).
This is Hopkins’ inventive argument: just as we cannot choose whether we see or hear or taste, so the aesthetic sense, equally of biological origin in the body, is exempt from serving one master or another. The crucial religious question, “Whom do you serve?” does not apply, Hopkins believes, to poetic inspiration, which arrives not as a decision but as an unexpected event that cannot be willed into being. What any masterpiece offers us is a sense of the mind that invented it, but the mind’s temporal potential is infinitely diverse, and the artist-as-bee, though creating honey from the flowers all about him, cannot exhaust the meadow’s nectar in a single retrieval. The mind, says the poet, is always awaiting the next perfection arriving unheralded from its indescribable “selfless self of self.” Of the artist’s flowers and honey he securely says,
The brightest blooms lie there unblown
His sweetest nectar hides behind.
Masterpieces are not the weak records of a life that is no more, as the sentimental watercolor will be when the children are dead. On the contrary, Hopkins declares, masterpieces arrive at a quintessence of mind and medium stronger than architecture, sweeter than music, and of a permanence exceeding that of human life.
The blessed potential of poetic invention had seemed ever-fresh at the time that Hopkins, released from the ascetic silence of “The Habit of Perfection,” exclaimed “How all’s to one thing wrought!” But by the time he composes “On the Portrait of Two Beautiful Young People,” he can no longer imagine the poem existing in an independent aesthetic space, aspiring to formal perfection; he has come to understand, through his own suffering, Wordsworth’s observations in “Tintern Abbey” that “a deep distress” had “humanized” his soul, that poetry must absorb and reflect not only nature but also “the still, sad music of humanity.” Hopkins’s “music of humanity” was only occasionally “still” and “sad”; rather, his physiological intensity — in which every feeling, from the exalted to the bitter, was heightened to acute nervous pitch — led him, in moral terms, to a witnessing aflame with pity and indignation. Although the masterpiece never cedes the aesthetic plane guaranteeing its existence into futurity, it is nonetheless now obliged, when it treats of human life, to take on the weight of moral judgment.
During the Christmas holiday of Hopkins’ composing “On the Portrait,” he was completing the last revisions of a poem he had been working on for two years, called “Spelt from Sibyl’s Leaves.” In his youth, delighting in finding symbols in the world of his own mixed nature as priest and poet, he had written in praise of “pied beauty”: “Glory be to God for dappled things.” But now he was obliged, morally, to separate all the things of the world, both natural and human, into “two flocks, two folds — black, white; | right, wrong.” To the lover of the dappled world, this last judgment, arising when “earth her being has unbound, her dapple is at an end” is an agonizing reduction of the inextinguishable fertility of the creative mind. But what Hopkins has come to understand, in contemplating the scattered leaves of his sybilline book, is, at last, his “selfless self of self.” He had given it that name so as to connect it to the self while representing it as alien to the same self: it is “most strange,” and above all it is voiceless (“most still”). From it came his moments of inspiration (always already “foredrawn to No or Yes”), which seemed to arrive independently only to be quenched by a force outside himself. Inspiration was, he said in a sonnet dedicated to Robert Bridges and written only six weeks before his death, a delight that “breathes once and, quenchèd faster than it came, / leaves yet the mind a mother of immortal song.” Hopkins had thought of his inspiration as coming from God, a suitably unknowable source, but “Spelt from Sibyl’s Leaves” articulates his shocked understanding that inspiration came entirely from his own self, and that its cause was the constant struggle of opposing on the battlefield of the self, under the unfurled banner of the integral being. It was, he now knows, his own suffering that, over time, kindled the later inspiration that generated his “burning witness.” The “selfless self of self ” was (as we would say) the unconscious mind sequestering his suffering until it could find its necessary formal attributes and emerge as a shaping inspiration.
Having understood that he was alone with himself in a material world of natural causes, the poet, in his apocalyptic sonnet of unrelieved darkness in which no God appears and heaven is populated only by the natural stars, describes his state as that of a man bound on a rack where he is both the torturer and the tortured. His thoughts, like upper and nether millstones, grind pitilessly, their product his wordless “groans,” poetry’s last expiring utterance, pain without words. He has necessarily become, now that his being has been unbound, the selfless self of self naked, stretching itself on an instrument of torture, a self unprotected, unhoused, beset by abrading contradictions, strung
on a rack
Where, selfwrung, selfstrung, sheathe- and shelterless, |
thoughts against thoughts in groans grind.
It is this pitiless and accurate self-portrait that has replaced the equivocal portrait of the beautiful children.